Those reddish-brown eyes - bmx321nc

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bmx321nc

|Monday 29 September 2009 17H53

 Everyday I try to forget about you... like today, it's all invane....

 As she sings: 'When I'm looking in your eyes, it feels like the first time...'

I remember the first time I saw yours for the first time

reddish-brown

like a sweltering summer sun at the end of a day

your toasted caramel skin

so clear so clean

at that moment I put everything on trade

even my mental well-being

the mere nearness of you

your curious, tentative touch

                                            enough

to have a domino effect on my emotions

and only you and I left standing

up, up and up it everything went

dangerously high, I could only hope for a softing landing

right there, at that moment, I started falling

you explored my deepest

uncovered my weakness

and I let you

I had to

give everything, all at once

to you

no! you didn't have to

lie

promise me the moon

for in your eyes

those reddish-brown eyes

I could see mine

filled with desire

an all to familiar hunger

me wanting

you giving and giving

rivers running rapidly

from your head

streaming sensuously

down your forhead

my chest it's sea

supplying me

with everything I didn't know I need

and it felt so right

'til

your eyes

those reddish-brown eyes

met mine

and I couldn't see a life

with you by my side

for you already lay beside another life

so I had to say good bye

but I'll always remember

your eyes

those reddish-brown eyes...

 

F#ck! will I ever get over you?

 

 


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written by sofistikitty, September 29, 2008
wow its sad beautiful and like sensuous all at one time
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written by joblue, September 30, 2008
I know the feeling...my love and i split up more than 5 months ago and it feels like yesterday. I think of him constantly - my first and last thoughts (and all those in between) are of him. He will always be in my heart, i will love him forever.
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written by chisel, September 30, 2008
that's deep smilies/cry.gif smilies/cry.gif
whoa its like sheeewwwwwww i can't even explain what i'm thinking after redaing it...
big ups,
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written by bmx321nc, September 30, 2008
thanks for the feedback and thoughts, much appreciated.

on a more serious not, i think i'm going off my trollie smilies/grin.gif

eish, i think i fall way to easy, should mind my step next time.

shup
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written by dudette, October 01, 2008
For a minute you had me there....thought you were referring to a lost pet...cant say i've seen someone with reddish brown eyes.
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written by bmx321nc, October 01, 2008
well the person in question was one of a kind... en jy ken mos as jy dronk is, jy sien
vekeerd...
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